Mr V, there have been completely abandoned things I planned to write and some I wrote it and then deleted it.
Abandoned things. I planned to have Andy screw over Cake Cream and Axl for a lot of money, but I abandoned that thinking it be really mean of him to do.
I thought about having Axl say,"You know if we were on a ship and I were the Captain and you were my Crew, and you pulled the "Play your Demo songs and not the songs I wrote for you," stunt, I'd make you walk the plank!" But I figured this would be really mean for Axl to say to Cake Cream , so I abandoned it.
I actually thought of having Young Axl tell Older Axl,"I feel like I'm the Titanic and Cake Cream is the fucking iceberg!" But felt that would be really mean for Axl to say about Cake Cream (I thought of this whole having Axl have a mini resentful breakdown about Cake Cream and want to abandon them. Older Axl was like,"Just take a little vacation by yourself and I'll watch Cake Cream for you " Axl went on the much needed mini vacation by himself and felt better.![]()
I actually wrote this nasty joke Axl pulled on Jimmy, and deleted it, thinking it be really out of line for Axl to do .
"Axl told Jimmy that James died after being hit in the stomach by Jimmy's guitar. He knew James was still alive but wanted to see if Jimmy truly hated James.
James cried emotionally,"No! I didn't mean to kill James, I just wanted to hurt him! I can't believe James is dead and I killed him! I'm a Murderer! "
Axl told him,"Go watch TV in your room. I'll protect you from the Authorities."
Jimmy numbly nodded and went to his room and watched TV..Axl smirked, knowing that Jimmy didn't actually hate James judging by his horrified reaction to James supposed death.
Axl called Billy and told him his ruse and Jimmy's horrified reaction. Billy said,"That was a rotten trick to pull on Jimmy when you know James is still alive." Axl responded,"But at least Jimmy doesn't hate James."
Billy said,"It was still rotten of you to lie to Jimmy about."
I deleted this quickly as it was a morbid ruse and out of line. I changed it to Axl telling Jimmy that James was hopped up on multiple painkillers and babbling incoherently and Jimmy having a casual attitude about it.
In earlier chapters, I mentioned that Axl thought Cake Cream was a messed up ship and he was Captain of this messed up ship. Cake Cream after getting multiple cases of bad luck straight up asked Axl if they were cursed and Axl responded,"You guys are not cursed..Cursed is the Titanic that hit an iceberg, broke in half and sunk to the bottom of the ocean. You guys are nowhere as near as a Titanic Ship that hit an iceberg, broke in half, and sunk to the bottom of the ocean..You guys are more like a Series Of Unfortunate Events." Cake Cream all smiled.





Thank you Dan!
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