Mr. V, a lot of things I abandoned or deleted because I wasn't trying to get sued by the real Axl in real life. I doubt the real Axl in real life would be okay with me writing that he'd tell his Protege/Clients if he we're their Ship Captain he'd make them walk the plank for playing their Demos instead of songs he wrote for them. I did however make it clear that my Fictional Axl is not okay with them playing their Demos and not the songs he wrote for them and resented them for that. I don't think real life Axl would be offended by me saying my Fictional Axl resented Cake Cream playing their Demos and songs he wrote for them.
I deleted the nasty joke my Fictional Axl pulled on Jimmy because I doubt real Axl would be okay with me writing that my Fictional Axl pulled a nasty joke like this, so I deleted it and wrote the Fictional truth that James was hopped up on multiple painkillers and babbling incoherently.. I don't think real Axl would be offended by my Fictional Axl telling Jimmy the Fictional truth, but I think he'd be offended by the nasty joke Axl pulled on Jimmy..
About me planning to have Andy screw over Cake Cream and Axl for a lot of money, I just didn't like Andy all that much when I was developing him and liked him the least out of all Cake Cream Members, so I had him be the Villain of Cake Cream, trying to sell out Axl for $5,000. Billy is definitely my favorite Cake Cream Member and I had Billy scold Andy for attempting to sell out Axl for $5,000 and Billy paid Andy $5,000 to not turn in Axl to the Authorities. Billy is also the semi protagonist/Main star of Cake Cream and closest to Axl.
I had Andy claim to Axl's face he was glad that Axl was their Guest when he had just said he wanted Axl out of the house and to turn him in for $5,000 to make him even more of a Villain.. planned to have all Cake Cream and Axl agree to say $20 million each for their Debut, but have Andy backstab them and try to betray them for something like 30 million. I realized I was doing Andy dirty, so I nixed the "Screw over Cake Cream and Axl for 30 Million and instead had him feel remorseful and regretful be attempted to sell out Axl for $5,000. In the next story, I had Jimmy blurt out that Andy tried to sell out Axl for $5,000, Axl and Andy had tension because of this, bit resolved it..
Thank you Dan! 
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