Yes, the meatoaf "made" the story.

Bravo, did you send the story to your agent?

Surely a writer of your caliber has an agent?

I especially liked how Darryl and Sean had the hots for each other, especially there at the end.

Does the final chapter have them fucking or just sucking each other off?

How about both?

You're on your way to the Big Time; when you get there just don't forget we Little People.