Originally Posted by
redietz
Kewl,
If you present a single event in present tense and then continue the narrative beyond it, usually the event is over, finished, not one of many events. Now the 1/11ers are arguing that using the word "probability" at the end in essence says that the author is expressly telling you that it was one of many events. The word "probability," however, does not have as its primary definition the mathematical definition they are trying to assign. So for their argument to make sense, they need both a non-conventional narrative structure and a secondary definition of "probability." It's possible, but convoluted, for a reader to interpret the piece of writing this way. It's probably more natural, common, call it what you will, for a reader to interpret it the way the "non-geniuses" interpret it. An editor would, after asking the author what the hell he really meant, completely rewrite the original question because of this.